1) Descriptive.
Grand theft auto is a very violent game where you can run around, killing a person, taking their car, and running over them. The game is rated M for Mature audiences and the problem is that parents don’t read the labels and give the game to little 7 year olds. Kids can run around in this city where they have complete freedom to do whatever they want. They can run to a military base and transport drugs without getting caught. Killing a police officer with a shotgun or take a tank and destroy the city. This is the kind of violence that gets into the minds of youth and affects them in school.
2) Twist
The game Gears of War 3 shows really violent actions, from shooting at robots and robots shooting at the character(which is you) and making you angry. This game has caused many anger issues. Shawn is a middle school student and is doing really well in this school and his parents have let him play this game. He has not been in trouble for anger issues as the guy in the news said.
3) Contrast and compare.
Xbox consoles have changed a lot and their have been a lot of changes. When the first Xbox was released, it was very broad. It was just a black box with a big X in the front. Now Xbox consoles have different type of cases that can be added and the new control less system: The Xbox Kinect. I has a new “Eye” Which is a camera that fallows your body and acts as a controller.
2) Twist
The game Gears of War 3 shows really violent actions, from shooting at robots and robots shooting at the character(which is you) and making you angry. This game has caused many anger issues. Shawn is a middle school student and is doing really well in this school and his parents have let him play this game. He has not been in trouble for anger issues as the guy in the news said.
3) Contrast and compare.
Xbox consoles have changed a lot and their have been a lot of changes. When the first Xbox was released, it was very broad. It was just a black box with a big X in the front. Now Xbox consoles have different type of cases that can be added and the new control less system: The Xbox Kinect. I has a new “Eye” Which is a camera that fallows your body and acts as a controller.
-Gustavo
I like the last one.
ReplyDelete-A
the twist is the better one to use to talk about the Xbox
ReplyDelete-H
Compare and Contrast is the best. Still needs an extra shot of coffee. Great topic (^-^)
ReplyDelete- A Foley Artist
All of your leads seem to be about different topics. I like the first one the best but depending on who your demographic is it might not be relevant for your magazine.
ReplyDeleteElena A.
I like the fist one, the violent descriptions lets me know that this violent game could have harmful influences.
ReplyDeleteMinji Kim